Finally Spoke to Her. Departed Forever.
First attempt on one line story. Hope you guys liked it. Please do let me know your thoughts or feedback on this.
Happy Reading 🙂
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Finally Spoke to Her. Departed Forever.
First attempt on one line story. Hope you guys liked it. Please do let me know your thoughts or feedback on this.
Happy Reading 🙂
Pure poetry
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Thanks Ian ❤🙂
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Really not impressive to start with. U end the story before starting itself. Try some thing cheerful witty and colorful than shades of departs. This is what I can say for now.
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Thanks for the feedback.. I’ll definitely consider in my upcoming posts. But, here in this post as it had to be of just 6 words. I thought of conveying a message which says after long wait he was finally able to speak to her. But only to know that they can never be together but have to part there ways forever 🙂
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One line story must end before full stop. So check your post you have a full stop in between. Amend within a , is better. 🌷 Happy Sunday and keep going.
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Ohh, well this is something I didn’t know thanks for that ❤ I’ll make sure to not repeat it in my upcoming posts 🙂😇
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No worries. Just inform what I can think only. Nothing serious. Your post says comment opinion so I mark my saying casually. One small punctuation can change the meaning of sentence for sure. Happy blogging and wish you a great day and week ahead….
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Cool 🙂 thank you for stopping by and sharing your point of view. Great day and a week ahead to you too ❤😇
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It is great!
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Thank you so much Simon ❤🙂
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👌👌👌👍
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Thank you so much Subbashini ❤🙂
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Dayum.
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Haha.. Thanks much Arshia.. Means a lot ❤🙂
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It couldn’t be much better 🌟🌟
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Thanks so much Saba ❤😇
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My pleasure 🌺🌺
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I like it. It is intriguing. Has me wondering what happened, what’s the story, or is forever really forever!
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.. ❤😇 The moment I read this comment, it made me think of a second one liner story which might probably turn out to be my next post ✌🙃
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Awesome!!!
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😊😇
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Thats excellent
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Thank you so much Ravi ❤😇
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Love this.
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Thank you so much ❤😇
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“Deaf. So much terror for nothing” Sorry !!!! I wanted to play also the game of 6 words. Even with my english so much French !
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Wow.. now that’s a terrific six word one.. for sure!! 😍❤ thank you so much for stopping by and also for writing down this amazing one liner as a comment.. ✌😇
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Thanks to you:)
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😊😇
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Interesting…Loved it
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Thank you so much .. Glad you liked it ❤😇
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Hello ! I hope you will not be sorry. I took the liberty of nominating you for the Liebster Award, because I really like your blog. And I hope my questions will amuse you. https://altairtheatre.com/2019/08/14/nominated-for-the-liebster/
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Thank you so much for the nomination.. ❤😇
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You’re welcome. It’s about naming people we like, and I like what you write. 🙂
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Thank you so much, it definitely means a lot 🙂
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Nice try .. 💜
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Thank you ❤
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